Lori Degman
Children's Book Author
Critiques
Need help with your rhyming manuscript?
Whether you're having trouble with the rhythm, rhyme, story arc, characters or plot - or you just want a fresh set of eyes (and ears) for your rhyming story - I can help!
Here's what you can expect from my critique:
* I will look at the overall story:
* Is the plot working?
* Does the story pull the reader in?
* Is there a satisfying ending?
* Is the story appropriate for it's targeted audience?
* I will do a line-by-line review of both rhythm and rhyme. I will
make suggestions about word cuts or changes and check for
overall grammar.
* I will point out what is working, what isn't and why.
* I will answer any follow-up questions you may have about the
critique.
* In an attempt to save a tree or two, I ask that you email your
manuscript and I will return your critique by email. Please put
CRITIQUE/YOUR NAME in the subject line to:
frame for it's return. My aim is to complete your critique
within two weeks of it's arrival, but I may not always be able
to do so because of other commitments.
* My Critique Fees:
* Up to 500 words - $35
* 501-1,000 words - $60
* 1,001 - 2,000 words - $100
* Revisions - $20.00
* If you are not completely satisfied with your critique, I will
happily refund your money!
I look forward to hearing from you and reading your work!
Testimonials:
"A thousand props for Lori Degman's critique! Lori critiqued one of my rhymed picture books and not only did she offer fabulous structural suggestions, but she got to the heart of the story instantaneously. Lori has an innate sense of rhythm, keen editorial eye and an instinct for the big picture. This critique was highly beneficial!"
~ Meg Fleming Lentz
"Lori Degman did a critique for me recently and actually counted the beat (literally every syllable!), in my entire 800 word PB manuscript to ensure that the rhyme’s meter and rhythm was perfect (and trust me, it was not!). Lori was skillful and professional in helping me find and fix each of the story’s weaknesses. She offered subtle suggestions, solid expert advice and some encouraging applause, too! Working with Lori was a fun and educational experience and her critique was a genuine treasure chest, absolutely brimming with golden nuggets of valuable information. I would highly recommend Lori’s services to all serious, aspiring authors."
~ Kenda Henthorn
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